Showing posts with label flipsnack. Show all posts
Showing posts with label flipsnack. Show all posts
Monday, 25 November 2013
Shark Finning is BAD
I think one thing I did well was that I came in with facts for my first paragraph to give them an idea about how many sharks we kill. At times I think I might have been playing the blame game but I took the part out.
I could work on trying to not to blame people for what ever I am writing about. I did that a couple times in this writing and I had to take it out.
Sunday, 20 October 2013
Until We Meet Again
Hello! You may read a sad story at one time or another right? Well, if you have maybe you should read this one. It is about my do- WAIT! If you want to know what happens in my sad story you have to read it! I hope you enjoy another sad story, or if this is your first time, enjoy your first sad story. This is a piece that we did on our own. That means no help from Mrs.C. I am proud of this story and once again I hope you enjoy it!
Did you enjoy my story? Leave some comments down below!
Did you enjoy my story? Leave some comments down below!
Tuesday, 1 October 2013
I Wish I Was A Million Years Away
Hello! Have you ever read a AWESOME book? Most likely. If you have you should read my amazing story about my fir- wait! You have to read to find out what this amazing story is about! I can't leak all of it's amazing awesomeness to you! Well now you HAVE to read to find out what it is about! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! In a seriousness you will have to read my amazing book called "I wish I was a million years away". Hope you enjoy it! =)
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