Hello! You may read a sad story at one time or another right? Well, if you have maybe you should read this one. It is about my do- WAIT! If you want to know what happens in my sad story you have to read it! I hope you enjoy another sad story, or if this is your first time, enjoy your first sad story. This is a piece that we did on our own. That means no help from Mrs.C. I am proud of this story and once again I hope you enjoy it!
Did you enjoy my story? Leave some comments down below!
You had a really good story! I liked how you put in a lot of emotion. In the title of the book you forgot to capitalize the first letter of each word, also just a one or two times in the book. But you had a great story and a hard day.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Amber. You put a lot of emotions into your story. But it is so sad. I was able to imagine the scene when the vets were about to put Shadow down. Great seed story!
DeleteI really like your blurb it was really catchy. I agree with Jade and Amber about how much emotion you put into your story. You did a great job with internal dialouge. You forgot to capitalize some names a few times. You did a great job with you amazing story!
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