Hello! Have you ever read a AWESOME book? Most likely. If you have you should read my amazing story about my fir- wait! You have to read to find out what this amazing story is about! I can't leak all of it's amazing awesomeness to you! Well now you HAVE to read to find out what it is about! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! In a seriousness you will have to read my amazing book called "I wish I was a million years away". Hope you enjoy it! =)
You did a very good job on your intro. Especially when you were about to talk about your story, then you stopped. Also just an opinion, maybe put the intro on top of the flip so people will read the awesome intro before your flip. But, also your story is really good!
ReplyDeleteWow your message was really clear in this story! You put so precise details that I could visualize your nervous face! But I think you should tell us a little bit about tubing because some people (like me) have no idea what tubing is.
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